Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. Respond directly with a clear yes-or-no statement, then add one or two specific details, such as when you used the bike, where you rode it, or why you liked it. Use the past tense accurately because the question refers to your childhood.

例: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was about seven years old. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends, especially at the weekends. It was a great way to have fun and stay active.

提案: You gave a relevant opening answer, but the response is incomplete and contains an unfinished phrase: “I used to I.” After stating your opinion, explain why bikes are popular and provide a specific example. Use linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “also,” and avoid the unclear sentence “It's like when I was a child.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and university students. This is because they are affordable, convenient, and environmentally friendly. For example, many people ride bikes to school or work, while children often cycle in parks at the weekend.

× It's like when I was a child. I used to I.

✓ They were also popular when I was a child, and I used to ride a bike.

The phrase 'I used to I' is grammatically incomplete because 'used to' must be followed by the base form of a verb, such as 'ride.' Also, 'They' correctly refers to bikes, while 'It's' does not clearly refer to the plural noun 'bikes.'