Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答没有直接回答考官关于“童年时是否有自行车”的问题，而是反问了一个关于书包的问题，因此内容不相关。应先明确回答“Yes, I did.”或“No, I didn’t.”，然后补充一到两个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、使用场景或学习骑车的经历。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven years old. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

提案: 你基本回答了问题，并提到了共享单车很流行、很方便，但表达中有较多停顿和重复，如“bike share sharing service”，影响自然度。短语“with signs the development of technology”语法不正确，可以改为“especially with the development of technology”。此外，最后一句没有完成，应说明你通常在哪里或为什么使用共享单车，并使用“because”或“for example”等连接词使内容更连贯。

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially because bike-sharing services have become convenient and affordable. I often use a shared bike to travel short distances, such as going to the subway station or a nearby supermarket.

× Yes uh, the bike is very popular in my country...

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

这里是在泛指自行车这一类交通工具，不是指某一辆特定的自行车，所以应使用复数形式“bikes”。同时，复数主语要搭配“are”，而不是“is”。

× the bike is very popular in my country

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country.

“the bike”通常表示某一辆特定的自行车。回答关于自行车这一类事物是否受欢迎的问题时，应使用复数名词“bikes”，通常不加“the”来表示泛指。

× With the development of technology, the bike share sharing service is very popular and convenient. I I usually uh, use.

✓ With the development of technology, bike-sharing services have become very popular and convenient. I usually use them.

原句中“bike share sharing service”表达重复且结构不自然；“bike-sharing services”是更正确的名词短语。“I I”中主语重复，应改为“I”。另外，“I usually use”后面缺少宾语，应加上“them”指代自行车共享服务或共享单车。