Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly instead of asking for clarification. Use a clear topic sentence and add one specific supporting detail, such as when you received the bike or how you used it. If you genuinely do not understand, say, “Sorry, could you repeat the question?”

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about eight years old. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

提案: Your first sentence answers the question directly, but the second sentence is grammatically incomplete and repeats the same idea. Use a complete sentence with a specific reason or example, and connect the details with a linking word such as “because” or “especially.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among teenagers and university students. They are affordable and convenient, so many people use them to travel short distances and avoid traffic.

× Many bikes in my country.

✓ There are many bikes in my country.

The original sentence is incomplete because it does not contain a verb. Use there are to introduce the existence of plural nouns such as bikes. The answer also fits the present-tense question about whether bikes are popular in the country.