Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You repeated the examiner’s question instead of answering it, so your response does not address the topic. Begin with a direct answer such as “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” and then add one or two specific details about the bike, how often you used it, or where you rode it. Use a linking word such as “because” or “for example” to connect your ideas naturally.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school. I especially enjoyed cycling with my friends at the weekend.

提案: You repeated the question rather than giving your opinion, so there is no relevant content to evaluate. Start with a clear statement of your view, such as “Yes, I think they are quite popular,” and support it with specific reasons or examples. You could mention cycling for exercise, commuting, or avoiding traffic, and use linking words such as “because” and “as a result.”

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and university students. Many people ride them for exercise or to avoid traffic, while others use shared bicycles for short journeys.