Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本直接，也给出了原因，但有几处明显的语法和用词问题。应将“school is”改为过去时“school was”，将“work”改为“walk”，并把“my parents told me I can”改为“my parents told me I could”。另外，“save money to buy things I like”与没有自行车的关系不够自然，可以说明父母认为步行上学更方便，或者把钱留给其他需要的东西。建议使用“because”和“so”连接原因和结果，并控制在2—3句内。

例: No, I didn’t. My school was within walking distance of my home, so I usually walked there. My parents also thought it was better to save the money for other things I needed.

提案: 回答中“没有”与后面的“小时候很流行”存在逻辑矛盾，而且缺少清晰的时间对比。可以先明确回答目前的情况，例如“Not as popular as they used to be”，然后说明原因。应将“when I was a child”后的时态改为过去时“they were popular”，并用“because”或“while”连接完整句子；“cars are more convenient”也应单独成句。建议补充一个具体原因，如汽车适合长途出行、天气不好时更舒适。

例: They are not as popular as they used to be. When I was a child, many people rode bikes, but nowadays more people prefer cars because they are more convenient, especially for long journeys.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my school is close to my home.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my school was close to my home.

句子讲述的是童年时期的情况，主句使用了一般过去时“didn't have”，因此原因从句中的“is”也应改为过去式“was”，以保持时态一致。

× I can't work there so it's unnecessary.

✓ I couldn't work there, so it was unnecessary.

这里描述的是过去的情况，所以“can't”应改为过去式“couldn't”，“it's”应改为“it was”。同时，在并列分句之间加逗号，使句子结构更清晰。

× My parents told me I can save money to buy things I like.

✓ My parents told me I could save money to buy things I liked.

在过去时“told me”之后，情态动词“can”通常要改为过去式“could”。同时，“like”改为“liked”，使间接引语中的时态与过去语境保持一致。

× No, when I was a child it's popular but nowadays many people like to buy cars it's more convenient.

✓ No, when I was a child, bikes were popular, but nowadays many people like to buy cars because they are more convenient.

“when I was a child”描述过去的情况，所以“it's popular”应改为“bikes were popular”。“bikes”是复数，谓语应使用“were”。

× No, when I was a child it's popular but nowadays many people like to buy cars it's more convenient.

✓ No, when I was a child, bikes were popular, but nowadays many people like to buy cars because they are more convenient.

原句把多个独立分句直接连接在一起，形成句子连接错误。应使用逗号和连词“but”，并用“because”连接“买车”和“更方便”之间的因果关系。

× Many people like to buy cars it's more convenient.

✓ Many people like to buy cars because they are more convenient.

“cars”是复数名词，因此代词应使用复数“they”，不能使用单数形式“it”。“they are”指代“cars”。