Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question in the past tense because it asks about your childhood. Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases such as “when I first riding the BA.” Use a clear topic sentence first, then add one specific detail or memory. Correct forms include “I did,” “I had,” and “when I was a child.”

例: Yes, I did. I had a pink bike when I was a child. I remember learning to ride it in front of my house, and my parents helped me when I fell.

提案: Give a direct answer and use the plural forms “bikes” and “them” because you are speaking generally. Replace the unclear phrase “do wr Right, ding” with “go riding” or “ride their bikes.” Improve coherence by using a linking word such as “For example” or “Also,” and add a specific reason why cycling is popular.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Many kids ride their bikes with their parents or classmates at the weekend. For example, families often cycle in parks because it is enjoyable and a good way to exercise.

× Yes I do, I have a buy when I'm child and if I remember I think it would be a pink one.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and, if I remember correctly, it was pink.

The question asks about a past situation, so use the past forms did, had, was, and was. Use had a bike instead of have a buy because the speaker is describing possession in childhood. The word buy is a verb, while bike is the intended noun.

× when I'm child

✓ when I was a child

The singular countable noun child requires the indefinite article a. The complete phrase is a child, not child by itself.

× I remembered when I first riding the BA when I first riding a bike.

✓ I remember when I first rode a bike.

Use remember because the speaker is referring to a memory being described now. Use the simple past rode for a completed action in the past. The repeated phrase is unnecessary, and bike is the correct noun.

× when I first riding the BA when I first riding a bike

✓ when I first rode a bike

After first, use the simple past verb rode to describe the completed first experience. Do not use riding in this structure.

× I think bike is very common in my country.

✓ I think bikes are very common in my country.

The statement refers to bicycles in general, so use the plural noun bikes. The plural subject also requires the plural verb are.

× A lot of kids have it.

✓ A lot of kids have them.

The pronoun must agree with the plural noun bikes. Use them for plural objects, not it, which refers to one thing.

× They can do riding on the weekend with their parents or with their classmates.

✓ They can ride on weekends with their parents or classmates.

After the modal verb can, use the base form of the verb: ride, not riding. The natural expression is ride on weekends, and repeating with before classmates is not necessary.