Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. Respond directly with a clear yes-or-no answer, then add one or two specific details, such as when you learned to ride, where you rode, or how often you used your bike.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was about six, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends. It was one of my favorite ways to spend time outdoors.

提案: Your answer is relevant and has a clear topic sentence, but the final phrase should be “for fun,” not “full fun.” Improve the answer by adding a linking word such as “In addition” and giving a specific example or reason, such as cycling in parks or using bikes for short journeys. Avoid making a general statement without supporting details.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among children and young people. Many adults also ride them for exercise or short journeys. In addition, cycling is a popular weekend activity because people can ride safely in parks and along bike paths.

× Many people also use them for exercise and full fun.

✓ Many people also use them for exercise and fun.

Full is not used naturally before fun in this expression. The correct phrase is have fun or for fun. Here, fun is used as a noun parallel to exercise, so the sentence should say for exercise and fun.