Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答没有直接回答问题，而是重复了考官的问题。应先明确回答“有”或“没有”，然后补充一到两个具体细节，例如自行车的用途、使用地点或相关经历。可以使用“because”“when”或“so”等连接词使答案更自然。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I sometimes went cycling with my friends at weekends.

提案: 答案的核心意思基本可以理解，但“Digressing”使用错误，而且句子缺少自然的表达。可以直接说“Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country”，然后说明流行的原因，例如价格便宜、方便通勤或有助于锻炼。建议使用“especially”“because”或“for example”补充具体信息。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in crowded cities. They are affordable, convenient for short trips, and also provide good exercise.

× Digressing bikes are popular in our country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country.

“Digressing”表示“离题的、偏离主题的”，不能用来修饰“bikes”，而且该词放在句首使句子意思不通。回答“Do you think...?”时，可以直接使用“Yes, ...”或“No, ...”来表达观点。建议使用“Bikes are popular in our country.”这样的完整句子。