Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Use the past tense consistently: say “had” and “loved” instead of “have” and “love.” Avoid incorrect phrases such as “I have a my favorite bike” and “one of my favorite activity.” Answer directly in one clear topic sentence, then add a specific detail. You could also say “ride my bike” rather than “bike around the village.”

例: Yes, I had a favorite bike when I was a child, and I loved riding it around my village. It was one of my favorite activities because I could explore the area with my friends.

提案: Make the main idea clear and use accurate expressions. Say “most people,” not “most of people,” and use “ride,” not “write.” Avoid repeating “one” and explain specifically why bikes are popular, such as for exercise, transportation, or group rides. Use a linking phrase such as “For example” to introduce a supporting detail.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people buy them for exercise and leisure, and it is common to see groups of cyclists riding together in the city at weekends.

× Yes, when I was a child I have a my favorite bike and I really love to bike around the village.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had my favorite bike, and I really loved riding around the village.

The question asks about the past, so use the past-tense forms had and loved instead of the present-tense forms have and love. Because loved is followed by an activity, riding is more natural than to bike in this sentence.

× Yes, when I was a child I have a my favorite bike and I really love to bike around the village.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had my favorite bike, and I really loved riding around the village.

Do not use the article a before the possessive adjective my. Use either a favorite bike or my favorite bike, but not a my favorite bike.

× And is this one of my favorite activity when I was a child?

✓ It was one of my favorite activities when I was a child.

The phrase refers to a past childhood experience, so use was rather than is. The sentence is also rewritten as a statement because the intended meaning is that this was one of the speaker's favorite activities.

× And is this one of my favorite activity when I was a child?

✓ It was one of my favorite activities when I was a child.

After one of my, the noun must be plural because the phrase refers to one item from a group. Therefore, activity should be activities.

× And is this one of my favorite activity when I was a child?

✓ It was one of my favorite activities when I was a child.

The original sentence has an unnatural structure and begins with an unnecessary And. Use the complete sentence It was one of my favorite activities when I was a child.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because most of people love to buy the expensive one one to write it which group in the city.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because most people love to buy bikes to ride in groups in the city.

Use most people when referring to people in general. Most of must be followed by a determiner, as in most of the people, so most of people is incorrect.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because most of people love to buy the expensive one one to write it which group in the city.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because most people love to buy bikes to ride in groups in the city.

The definite article the is used for a specific or previously identified item. Here, the speaker is referring to bikes in general, so use bikes or an expensive bike instead of the expensive one.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because most of people love to buy the expensive one one to write it which group in the city.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because most people love to buy bikes to ride in groups in the city.

The phrase write it which group is not grammatically meaningful in this context. Use the verb ride and the phrase ride in groups to express the intended meaning clearly. Also avoid repeating one one.