Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer in a complete sentence and add one specific supporting detail, such as when you used the bike, where you rode it, or how you felt about it. This will make your response more natural and effective while keeping it within two or three sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was young. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed the freedom it gave me.

提案: State your opinion clearly and use accurate grammatical structures. Avoid repeating words such as “car” and “make,” and explain the reason logically with linking words. You could say that cars and motorcycles are more common because they are convenient, but also mention the resulting traffic problems. Use relevant vocabulary such as “congested roads” or “traffic jams” instead of unclear expressions.

例: I would say that bikes are not very popular in Thailand because most people prefer to travel by car or motorcycle. These vehicles are more convenient for long distances, although they often cause serious traffic jams in cities.

× I would say no because in Thailand we always drive a car liar the motorcycle and the car which quite makes make a heavy traffic litigation.

✓ I would say no because in Thailand we usually drive cars or ride motorcycles, and these vehicles create heavy traffic.

The original sentence does not use conjunctions clearly. Use or to present alternatives such as cars or motorcycles, and use and to connect the two related clauses. Avoid combining incomplete phrases such as car liar the motorcycle.

× I would say no because in Thailand we always drive a car liar the motorcycle and the car which quite makes make a heavy traffic litigation.

✓ I would say no because in Thailand we usually drive cars or ride motorcycles, and these vehicles create heavy traffic.

The sentence discusses vehicles in general, so plural nouns are more appropriate: cars, motorcycles, and vehicles. A singular noun such as a car would refer to one specific car.

× I would say no because in Thailand we always drive a car liar the motorcycle and the car which quite makes make a heavy traffic litigation.

✓ I would say no because in Thailand we usually drive cars or ride motorcycles, and these vehicles create heavy traffic.

When speaking about cars and motorcycles in general, do not use the indefinite article a or the definite article the before the plural nouns. Also, traffic is usually an uncountable noun, so we say heavy traffic rather than a heavy traffic.

× I would say no because in Thailand we always drive a car liar the motorcycle and the car which quite makes make a heavy traffic litigation.

✓ I would say no because in Thailand we usually drive cars or ride motorcycles, and these vehicles create heavy traffic.

The original sentence contains unclear and incomplete word groups, including car liar the motorcycle and which quite makes make a heavy traffic litigation. Arrange the sentence into complete clauses with a clear subject and verb: people drive cars or ride motorcycles, and these vehicles create heavy traffic.

× I would say no because in Thailand we always drive a car liar the motorcycle and the car which quite makes make a heavy traffic litigation.

✓ I would say no because in Thailand we usually drive cars or ride motorcycles, and these vehicles create heavy traffic.

The plural subject these vehicles requires the plural verb create, not creates. The original phrase makes make also contains an incorrect verb form and should be replaced with the correctly agreeing verb create.