Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本切题，但存在明显的词汇和语法问题。应使用过去时，因为问题询问童年经历：将“have”改为“had”，将“back”改为“bike”，并用“ride my bike”表达“骑自行车”，而不是“wear my bike”。建议先直接回答，再补充一个具体用途或经历，并使用“for example”连接细节。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was quite simple, but I used to ride it to school every day. For example, it helped me get there faster and have more freedom.

提案: 回答的主要观点是“自行车很受欢迎”，但表达不清晰且重复使用“yes”和“for example”。“sheer bag”应改为“shared bikes”或“bikes”，“the back”应改为“bikes”，“enabling”不符合语境，可使用“convenient for commuting”或“useful for transportation”。建议采用“观点+原因+具体例子”的结构，并说明在城市街道、校园或地铁站附近经常可以看到共享单车。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Shared bikes are convenient and affordable, so many people use them for short trips or to get to the subway. You can often see them parked near schools, offices, and train stations.

× Yes, I have my back.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

问题使用了现在时“have”，但考官问的是“Did you have...?”，询问的是过去的经历，因此应使用过去时“had”。另外，“a bike”表示“一辆自行车”，比“my back”更准确。

× Yes, I have my back.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

可数名词“bike”表示一辆自行车时，前面需要使用不定冠词“a”。应说“a bike”，而不是直接说“bike”。

× It's forward a simple use.

✓ It was mainly for transportation.

原句的词语排列和句子结构不正确，无法形成自然、完整的英语句子。“was mainly for transportation”表示“主要用于交通”，结构完整、意思清楚。由于问题询问童年时期的自行车，使用过去时“was”更合适。

× For example, when I go to school I will wear my back.

✓ For example, when I went to school, I rode my bike.

这里描述的是童年时期的经历，应使用过去时。“go”应改为“went”。此外，骑自行车应使用动词“ride”，其过去式是“rode”；“wear”表示“穿戴”，不能用于表示“骑自行车”。

× Sheer bag is very popular in anywhere.

✓ Shared bikes are very popular in my country.

“shared bikes”表示共享单车这一类事物，通常需要使用复数形式“bikes”。主语为复数时，后面的系动词也使用“are”。

× Sheer bag is very popular in anywhere you can see this sheer bag.

✓ Shared bikes are very popular in my country, and you can see them everywhere.

“anywhere”表示“任何地方”，在此处不能与介词“in”直接搭配表达“到处”。表示“到处”时应使用“everywhere”，前面不需要介词“in”。表示“在我的国家”时，使用“in my country”。

× You can see this sheer bag and really the back is very good for enabling.

✓ You can see them everywhere, and they are very convenient for transportation.

“shared bikes”是复数名词，后面应使用复数代词“them”或“they”，不能使用单数的“this”或“it”。“them”作“see”的宾语，“they”作后一句的主语。