Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本回应了问题，但语法和表达不清晰。“I not”应改为“I wasn’t”，“back”在这里不能表达“骑自行车”，应使用“ride a bike”或“riding”。建议先直接回答，再补充一个具体原因，例如你不会骑车或小时候没有自行车。

例: No, I didn’t. I wasn’t very good at riding a bike when I was a child, and my parents didn’t buy me one because they were worried about my safety.

提案: 回答没有清楚表达自行车是否受欢迎，存在重复用词和严重的搭配、语法问题。“it might come true”不适合表达“很受欢迎”，“people people”应删除。建议先明确回答“Yes, they are”或“No, they aren’t”，然后使用连接词补充具体原因，例如环保、方便或适合短途出行。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and young adults. This is because they are affordable, environmentally friendly, and convenient for short-distance journeys.

× No sorry, I not good at back when I was a child.

✓ No, sorry. I wasn't good at riding a bike when I was a child.

“when I was a child”表示过去时间，因此主句中的系动词也要使用过去式。应将“I not good”改为“I wasn't good”。建议注意一般过去时中 be 动词的形式：I was / I wasn't。

× No sorry, I not good at back when I was a child.

✓ No, sorry. I wasn't good at riding a bike when I was a child.

介词“at”后面如果接动词，动词要使用-ing形式。“back”不能在这里作正确的动词使用；表达“骑自行车”应使用“riding a bike”。建议记住固定结构“be good at + 名词或动词-ing形式”。

× I think it might come true people people prefer by nature.

✓ I think bikes might be popular because people naturally prefer them.

“come true”通常表示“实现”，不能用来表达“某事可能很受欢迎”。这里应使用“might be popular”。情态动词“might”后面要接动词原形，因此“might be”是正确结构。

× I think it might come true people people prefer by nature.

✓ I think bikes might be popular because people naturally prefer them.

原句中两个分句之间缺少连词，导致句子连接不完整。这里需要使用“because”来表示因果关系：“自行车可能很受欢迎，因为人们天生喜欢它们”。建议检查两个完整分句之间是否需要“because、so、although”等连词。

× I think it might come true people people prefer by nature.

✓ I think bikes might be popular because people naturally prefer them.

动词“prefer”在这里需要一个宾语，指代前面提到的“bikes”，因此应使用宾格代词“them”。建议在使用及物动词时检查后面是否需要宾语，并根据所指对象选择“it、them”等代词。