Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本直接，但时态错误：谈论童年经历应使用一般过去时，将 “don't have” 改为 “didn't have”。此外，可以补充一个简短原因或相关细节，使答案更完整，例如说明你小时候通常如何出行。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents usually drove me to school, so I didn’t really need one.

提案: 答案没有清楚回答自行车在本国是否流行，句子中的 “when I was a trial” 和 “won a bike's old me” 表达不自然且难以理解。应先明确表态，例如使用 “Yes, I think they are quite popular”，然后用连接词补充具体原因，如环保、方便、适合短途出行，并举出城市骑行或共享单车的例子。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. They are convenient and environmentally friendly, and many people use shared bikes to travel short distances.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

“when I was a child”表示过去的时间，因此主句中的动词也应该使用一般过去时。将“don't have”改为“didn't have”。建议：描述过去的经历时，注意整句的时态保持一致。

× Maybe because when I was a trial, I actually won a bike's old me.

✓ Maybe because, when I was a child, I actually won an old bike.

原句后半部分“a bike's old me”结构错误，不能用所有格“bike's”来表达“旧自行车”，应改为“an old bike”。另外，“when I was a trial”不符合句意；表达“当我还是个孩子时”应使用“when I was a child”。建议：描述物品时使用“冠词 + 形容词 + 名词”的结构，例如“an old bike”。