Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời có ý định trả lời “Yes”, nhưng bị lặp từ, sai thì và phát âm/ dùng từ khiến ý nghĩa không rõ. Hãy dùng quá khứ đơn vì câu hỏi hỏi về thời thơ ấu: “I had”. Ngoài ra, “my mother bought me a small bike” là cách diễn đạt đúng; không dùng “bow” hoặc “pie”. Nên trả lời theo cấu trúc trực tiếp: câu trả lời + chi tiết về chiếc xe hoặc cách bạn sử dụng nó, trong 2–3 câu rõ ràng.

例: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a small bike when I was about six years old. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: Câu trả lời rất ngắn và có nhiều lỗi dùng từ khiến người nghe khó hiểu. “Immaculate” không phù hợp với ngữ cảnh; em có thể dùng “I think so” hoặc “Yes, they are”. Hãy dùng danh từ số nhiều và động từ đúng: “Many people have bikes” hoặc “Bikes are popular”. Nên bổ sung một lý do cụ thể, chẳng hạn xe đạp rẻ, tiện lợi hoặc tốt cho sức khỏe.

例: Yes, they are quite popular in my country. Many people use bikes because they are affordable and convenient, especially for short trips. They are also a good way to exercise.

× Yes, I have I have when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child.

The question asks about a past time, so the past-tense form had is needed instead of the present-tense form have. Use had when describing possession in the past.

× My mother bow my when I was a child.

✓ My mother bought me one when I was a child.

The verb buy must be changed to its past-tense form bought because the action happened when the speaker was a child. The object pronoun me is also needed after bought to show who received the bike.

× I stopped to

✓ I stopped riding it.

The original sentence is incomplete because stopped to is not followed by a complete idea. When stop means ending an activity, it should be followed by a gerund, such as riding.

× Yes, immaculate everyone have a pie.

✓ Yes, almost everyone has a bike.

Everyone is grammatically singular, so the verb must be has, not have. The word almost is appropriate for expressing that most people have bikes, and bike correctly matches the topic of the question.