Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is direct and natural, but it is too brief to demonstrate a wider range of language. Add a brief reason, description, or personal detail, and use a linking word such as “because” or “so”.

例: Yes, absolutely. I had a blue mountain bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around my neighbourhood with my friends at weekends.

提案: Your answer clearly expresses your opinion, but it does not explain why bikes are popular. Extend it with a specific reason and, if possible, mention a relevant example or comparison. This will make your response more effective and demonstrate better vocabulary.

例: Yes, absolutely. Bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient, especially in busy cities. Many people use them to commute to work or to exercise at the weekend.