Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood. Say “I didn’t have a bike” rather than “I don’t have.” Add a brief reason or alternative activity to make the response more complete and natural.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe to ride on the busy roads near our home, so I usually played football with my friends instead.

提案: Use the natural phrase “very popular” instead of “so much popular,” and use “among all generations” rather than “all generation.” Avoid repeating words and apologizing when you lose your train of thought; pause briefly and continue with a simple sentence. Clearly explain why bikes are popular and include a specific example, such as commuting, exercise, or children’s recreation.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country among people of all ages and both genders. Many children ride them for fun, while adults often use them to commute or exercise. In my city, bike lanes have also become more common, which has encouraged even more people to cycle.

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I didn't.

The question uses the past tense, 'Did you have...?', so the answer should also use the past tense. The auxiliary verb 'did' is used to answer a question about a past situation. Since 'have' is a main verb here, 'didn't' is the natural short answer.

× Yeah, it's so much popular in my country that all generation, boys and girls also...

✓ Yeah, bikes are very popular in my country among all generations, boys and girls alike.

'Popular' is an adjective, so it should be modified by 'very,' not 'much.' We normally say 'very popular,' not 'much popular.' Also, 'bikes' is the subject being discussed, so 'bikes are' is clearer than 'it's.'

× Yeah, it's so much popular in my country that all generation, boys and girls also...

✓ Yeah, bikes are very popular in my country among all generations, boys and girls alike.

'All' is used with a plural countable noun in this context, so 'all generation' should be 'all generations.' The plural form is also appropriate because the sentence refers to more than one age group.