Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本切题，但应使用过去时，因为问题问的是童年经历：将“have”改为“had”。“I really like it”重复了两次，可以删去一次；“very beautiful for me”表达不自然，可改为“very beautiful”或“I thought it was beautiful”。建议先直接回答，再补充自行车的外观、用途或它为什么重要，并使用“because”连接原因。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was bright red and had a small basket on the front. I loved riding it around my neighborhood because it made me feel independent. I often used it to visit my friends after school.

提案: 回答方向正确，但最后两句不完整，尤其是“because.”和“It is.”属于句子残缺。不要绝对地说“Every family”，除非确实有依据，可以改为“Many families”。应说明自行车受欢迎的具体原因，例如价格便宜、方便通勤或有助于锻炼，并用完整句子和连接词组织答案。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many families own at least one because bicycles are affordable and convenient for short journeys. In addition, cycling is a popular way to exercise, especially among young people. However, people in large cities often choose public transport because of heavy traffic.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

问题询问的是你小时候是否有自行车，时间发生在过去，所以应该使用一般过去时。将“have”改为过去式“had”。

× I really like it.

✓ I really liked it.

这里是在描述小时候对自行车的感受，应该使用一般过去时，所以将“like”改为“liked”。

× When I was a child I thought it was very beautiful for me.

✓ When I was a child, I thought it was very beautiful to me.

表示“在某人看来”时，通常使用介词“to”，而不是“for”。另外，在“When I was a child”后面加逗号，可以更清楚地分隔时间状语和主句。

× I really like it.

✓ I really liked it.

这句话继续描述过去小时候的感受，因此动词应使用一般过去时“liked”，与前面的“When I was a child”保持一致。

× because.

✓ I think bikes play a very important role in my country because every family has a bike in their home.

“because”是从属连词，不能单独构成句子，后面必须接一个完整的原因从句。应将它与前面的主句连接起来。

× It is.

✓ They are very popular.

“It is”后面缺少必要的补充成分，句意不完整。此外，前文的主语是复数“bikes”，所以应使用复数代词“They”和复数动词“are”。