Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接表达了“没有自行车”，但原因部分不自然且有语法错误。“I have no long time”应改为过去时，并使用更准确的表达，例如“didn’t have much time to ride one”或“didn’t have enough time to learn”。建议先给出明确回答，再用 because 补充具体原因；同时注意时态一致，整句话控制在1—2句即可。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I didn’t have much time to ride one. My parents usually took me to school instead.

提案: 回答表达了肯定观点，但存在主谓一致、句型和冠词问题。“it have”应改为“There are”或“my country has”，“in the street”也可以改为“on the streets”。建议先明确说明自行车很受欢迎，再补充公共自行车的具体情况，例如它们常见于市中心或地铁站附近，并使用连接词使内容更连贯。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. There are many public bike-sharing stations on the streets, especially near subway stations and shopping areas, so people often use them for short journeys.

× Actually I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I have no long time to ride a bike.

✓ Actually, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't have much time to ride a bike.

这里谈论的是童年时期的过去情况，所以 have 应改为过去式 didn’t have。描述过去没有时间，应使用 didn’t have，而不是现在时 have。建议先判断事件发生的时间，再统一使用相应的时态。

× Actually I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I have no long time to ride a bike.

✓ Actually, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't have much time to ride a bike.

time 在表示“时间”这一抽象概念时通常是不可数名词，不能说 no long time。这里应使用 much time，表示“很多时间”。建议区分可数名词和不可数名词：可数名词用 many，不可数名词用 much。

× Sure, it have many public bikes in the street.

✓ Sure, there are many public bikes on the streets.

句子想表达“有许多公共自行车”，应使用 There be 句型，即 There are many public bikes。因为 bikes 是复数，所以 be 动词要用 are。建议表达“某地有某物”时使用 there is/are，而不是 it have。

× Sure, it have many public bikes in the street.

✓ Sure, there are many public bikes on the streets.

表示自行车位于街道上，通常使用介词 on，而不是 in，因此应说 on the streets。建议记住：在街道、路面等表面上通常使用 on。