Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答的主要问题是时态、句子重复和表达不清。谈论童年经历时，应使用过去时，例如用“had”和“didn’t know”。“ride on a bike”应改为“ride a bike”，“TR through”意思不明确，可能想表达“got rid of”或“threw away”。建议先直接回答，再补充一个原因或结果，并控制在2—3个清晰句子内。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I didn’t know how to ride it. Eventually, my parents got rid of it when I was in primary school.

提案: 回答结构清楚，先表达观点，再给出原因和结果，并使用了“because”和“So”进行衔接。可以进一步改进语法和自然度：“will take”应改为一般现在时“take”，“more or private cars”应改为“public transport or private cars”，因为香港的交通方式是一个普遍事实。另外，可以加入更具体的原因，例如香港道路拥挤、山路多或公共交通便利。

例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in Hong Kong. Most people use public transport or drive cars because the city is crowded and its public transport system is very convenient. As a result, there aren’t many cyclists on the main roads.

× Yes I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

“when I was a child”表示过去的时间，因此主句也应使用一般过去时。不能使用现在时“do have”，应改为过去时“had”。

× I don't know how to ride on it.

✓ I didn't know how to ride it.

前文讲的是童年时期的经历，所以“know”应使用过去式“knew”。否定形式应为“didn't know”。此外，表达“骑自行车”时通常说“ride a bike”或“ride it”，不需要使用“on”。

× But I didn't but I don't know how to ride on it.

✓ But I didn't know how to ride it.

句中重复使用了两个“but”，造成连词重复和句子结构混乱。一个转折连词“but”就足够了。

× So my parents TR through their bicycle when I was in primary school.

✓ So my parents taught me to ride a bicycle when I was in primary school.

“when I was in primary school”表示过去时间，因此动词应使用过去时。“teach”的过去式是“taught”。表达“教某人做某事”应使用“teach someone to do something”，所以应说“taught me to ride a bicycle”。

× So I so my parents TR through their bicycle when I was in primary school.

✓ So my parents taught me to ride a bicycle when I was in primary school.

原句中“so I so”重复，且“TR through their bicycle”不能组成正确的英语句子。应使用完整结构“主语 + 动词 + 宾语 + to do”，即“my parents taught me to ride a bicycle”。

× Most people in Hong Kong will take public transport more or private cars but not bicycles.

✓ Most people in Hong Kong take public transport or use private cars, but they do not use bicycles.

这里描述的是香港人的一般习惯，应使用一般现在时“take”和“use”，而不是表示将来或意愿的“will take”。同时，“more or private cars”结构不完整，应改为“public transport or private cars”。

× Most people in Hong Kong will take public transport more or private cars but not bicycles.

✓ Most people in Hong Kong take public transport or use private cars, but they do not use bicycles.

“more or”不是正确的并列结构。并列两个选择时应使用“or”，例如“take public transport or use private cars”。“but”用于表示这些人不使用自行车，使用正确，但后面需要补充完整的主语和谓语。