Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly without repeating the same idea in the first two sentences. Add one specific detail about the bike or how you used it to make the response more vivid and effective.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike as a prize for doing well in school, and I was really excited because I could ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: Give a clearer answer about your country rather than focusing only on your friends. Also, say “own a bike” or “have bikes” instead of “own their bikes,” and support your opinion with a specific reason or example.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people use them for exercise and short trips because they are affordable and convenient.