Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly and use a clear topic sentence. The current response is difficult to understand and does not mention whether you had a bike. Use the past tense for childhood experiences, and add one specific detail or reason if possible.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

提案: State your opinion clearly and give a relevant reason. The current answer is incomplete and does not explain why bikes are or are not popular. Use a linking word such as “because” to connect your opinion with a specific reason.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient and inexpensive. Many people use them to travel short distances or exercise.

× I children know a pig.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past situation, so the answer should use the past tense. Had is the past tense of have. Also, child is singular after the article a; children is plural and cannot be used with a.

× No, I can't read uh because.

✓ No, they aren't.

The original sentence does not answer the question and ends with because without providing a complete reason. The question asks whether bikes are popular, so use they to refer to bikes and aren't as the negative form of are.