Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本直接，但将“bike”误说成了“bag”，影响了信息准确性；“own my own”重复，可以改为“own a bike”。建议先明确回答“No”，再补充一个简短原因，例如家庭经济、居住环境或父母不允许。注意使用“when I was young/when I was a child”等自然表达，并控制在两句话左右。

例: No, I didn’t. My parents couldn’t afford to buy me a bike when I was a child, so I usually walked or took the bus.

提案: 回答中有明显的语法、词汇和发音/拼写问题：“There used to be very popular”应改为“There used to be very popular”并补充主语，或更自然地说“Bikes used to be very popular”；“recently years”应为“in recent years”；“eback/eBags”应为“e-bikes”；“the island I'm leaving at”应为“the island where I live”。建议先直接回答受欢迎程度，再用“however”说明变化，最后提供具体原因或例子。避免说“millions of the e-bikes”，可说“millions of people use e-bikes”或“there are millions of e-bikes”。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Although traditional bicycles used to be more common, e-bikes have become increasingly popular in recent years, especially on the island where I live. They are convenient for commuting and are also useful on hilly roads.

× There used to be very popular.

✓ Bikes used to be very popular.

句子缺少明确的主语。应在“used to be”前加入主语“Bikes”，说明过去受欢迎的对象。

× But recently years we have eback more popular.

✓ But in recent years, we have eback more popular.

表示“近年来”应使用固定搭配“in recent years”，不能直接说“recently years”。

× Especially in the island I'm leaving at.

✓ Especially on the island I'm leaving at.

表示在岛上通常使用介词“on”，所以应将“in the island”改为“on the island”。