Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời trực tiếp và có thêm lý do cụ thể, nhưng cần dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán: “I liked” thay vì “I like”. Với xe đạp, dùng động từ “ride” tự nhiên hơn “drive”. Bạn cũng có thể thêm một chi tiết ngắn về chiếc xe hoặc nơi bạn thường đạp xe để câu trả lời sinh động hơn, nhưng vẫn nên giữ trong tối đa 3–4 câu.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad bought it for me, and I was thrilled because I loved riding it around my neighbourhood. I usually rode it to the park at weekends.

提案: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm và đưa ra lý do, nhưng cần sửa lỗi chính tả “bias” thành “bikes”. Vì “bikes” là danh từ số nhiều, nên dùng “them” thay cho “it”; ngoài ra, cụm “using it to ride around” chưa tự nhiên, nên đổi thành “riding them around”. Tránh dùng “all the kids” nếu không muốn khái quát quá mức; “many children” tự nhiên và chính xác hơn. Bạn có thể bổ sung một lý do khác, chẳng hạn xe đạp rẻ, tiện lợi hoặc tốt cho sức khỏe.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and teenagers. I often see many young people riding them around my neighbourhood. They are affordable, convenient, and a good way to stay healthy.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad bought it for me and I was very happy because I like to drive it around my neighbourhood.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad bought it for me, and I was very happy because I liked to drive it around my neighbourhood.

The sentence describes a past situation, so the verb 'like' should be in the past tense: 'liked.' Keep the tense consistent when talking about past experiences. A useful improvement strategy is to check whether time expressions such as 'when I was a child' require past-tense verbs.

× Yes, I do think bias are popular in my country because I always see all the kids in my neighbourhood using it to ride around.

✓ Yes, I do think bias are popular in my country because I always see all the kids in my neighbourhood using them to ride around.

The pronoun 'it' is singular, but it refers to 'bikes,' which is plural. Therefore, the correct pronoun is 'them.' Make sure that a pronoun agrees in number with the noun it refers to: use 'it' for one thing and 'them' for more than one thing.