Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly using the correct past tense: “Yes, I did.” Use “bike,” not “bite,” and say “when I was a child” instead of “when I’m a child.” Add one specific detail, such as how often you used it or where you rode it.

例: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: Use the plural subject and correct verb forms: “Yes, they are popular because people use bicycles to travel to work.” Avoid “people they” and “during at work.” Add a specific reason or example to make the answer more developed and coherent.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work. They are especially common in large cities, where they help people avoid traffic and save money on transportation.

× Yes, I did have a bite when I'm a child.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past situation, so the verb be must be in the past tense: was, not am. The word bike is also needed because the topic is bicycles.

× Yes, it is because people they using the bicycle during at work

✓ Yes, they are popular because people use bicycles to get to work.

Bikes is plural, so use the pronoun they, not it. Also, people is already the subject, so the extra pronoun they must be removed.

× Yes, it is because people they using the bicycle during at work

✓ Yes, they are popular because people are using bicycles to get to work.

The present participle using needs the auxiliary verb are when it is used in the present continuous: people are using. However, use is more natural for describing a general habit.

× Yes, it is because people they using the bicycle during at work

✓ Yes, they are popular because people use bicycles to get to work.

The correct preposition for expressing the purpose of traveling to one's workplace is to: get to work. During at work is not a correct prepositional phrase in this context.