Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接且语法基本正确，但“in my childhood”不够自然，可以改为“when I was a child”。建议补充一个具体细节，例如你在哪里骑车、多久骑一次，或你对这辆自行车的感受。可以使用“because”或“so”连接原因和结果，使答案更丰富。

例: Yes, I did. My mom bought me a black bike when I was about seven. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, so it became one of my favorite childhood possessions.

提案: 这个回答没有直接回答自行车在你国家是否流行，而且“very really”搭配错误；“its color”也没有明确指代对象。应该先明确说明自行车是否流行，然后给出具体原因，例如自行车环保、方便、价格低，或适合短途出行。建议使用“because”或“especially”补充细节。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and young adults. They are affordable and convenient for short trips. In addition, many people choose bikes because they are environmentally friendly.

× Yes, I very really like its color.

✓ Yes, I really like their color.

“bikes”是复数名词，因此不能使用单数物主代词“its”，应改为复数物主代词“their”。另外，“really”已经可以修饰“like”，不需要和“very”连用。回答时还应注意代词的单复数要与所指名词保持一致。

× Yes, I very really like its color.

✓ Yes, I really like their color.

“very really”不是自然的副词搭配。“really”可以直接修饰动词“like”，表示“非常喜欢”或“确实喜欢”，所以应说“I really like...”。今后使用副词修饰动词时，应选择自然、正确的搭配，避免重复使用程度副词。