Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Используйте прошедшее время, поскольку вопрос относится к детству: “had”, а не “have”. Также добавьте правильную конструкцию “when I was a child” и одну конкретную деталь, например, как часто вы катались или где использовали велосипед. Ответ должен начинаться с прямого ответа и состоять из 2–3 связанных предложений.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed it.

提案: Используйте полную грамматическую конструкцию: “Bikes are very popular”, а не “bike ... so popular”. Так как вопрос просит мнение, добавьте причину или конкретный пример, используя связку “because” или “especially”. Также избегайте паузы “uh” и правильно употребляйте множественное число “bikes”.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people use them for exercise and short journeys because they are convenient and environmentally friendly.

× Yes, I have a bike when a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a situation in the past, so use the past-tense form had instead of the present-tense form have.

× Yes, I have a bike when a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The phrase when a child is incomplete because it does not contain a subject and a verb. Use the complete clause when I was a child.

× Yes, bike uh, so popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

When speaking about bikes in general, use the plural noun bikes rather than the singular noun bike.

× Yes, bike uh, so popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

The original sentence is missing the verb are. The sentence needs the verb be before the adjective popular.

× Yes, bike uh, so popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

The plural subject bikes must be followed by the plural verb are. Subject and verb must agree in number.