Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly, but add one or two supporting details. Explain why you did not have a bike and, if possible, mention what you used instead or how you felt about it. This will make your response more complete and natural while staying within the five-sentence limit.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride on the busy roads near our home. Instead, I usually walked to school or played in the park.

提案: Avoid uncertain fragments such as “Might be.” Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons, examples, or a comparison. Use linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “although” to make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and university students. They are affordable and convenient for short journeys, and they can also help people avoid traffic. However, cycling is less common in areas where the roads are unsafe.

× Might be, I don't know exactly.

✓ They might be popular, but I don't know exactly.

The original answer is an incomplete sentence because it omits the subject of the verb phrase. Use they to refer to bikes and include the adjective popular to make the meaning clear. The conjunction but correctly connects the uncertain opinion with the speaker's lack of knowledge.