Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You repeated the question instead of answering it, and “bite” is incorrect here; the correct word is “bike.” Give a direct answer first, then add one or two specific details, such as when you got the bike, how often you used it, or where you rode it.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: You repeated the question rather than expressing your opinion, and “bias” should be “bikes.” Start with a clear opinion and support it with a specific reason or example, such as cycling for exercise, transportation, or environmental reasons.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people ride them for exercise, and they are also a convenient way to travel short distances.