Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Use the past tense consistently: say “I had” rather than “I do have,” and include the article “a” before “child.” Replace the unnatural phrase “I really love this” with “I really loved it” or “I really enjoyed riding it.” Answer directly first, then add one specific detail about the bike or how often you used it.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really loved it. It was small and red, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence, such as “No, bikes aren’t as popular as cars in my country.” Correct the grammar by using “everyone prefers,” and avoid repeating or combining contradictory phrases such as “ride a bike car” and “ride the bike.” Give a specific reason, such as convenience, long distances, traffic conditions, or the availability of public transportation. Use a linking word like “because” to connect your explanation clearly.

例: No, bikes aren’t as popular as cars in my country. Most people prefer cars because they are more comfortable and convenient for travelling long distances. However, bikes are becoming more common among young people who use them for exercise or short trips.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was child and I really love, uh, this.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really loved it.

The question asks about a past experience, so the verbs should be in the past tense: had and loved. Use the past tense consistently when describing something that happened during your childhood.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was child and I really love, uh, this.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really loved it.

The singular countable noun child requires the indefinite article a. Say a child, not child. Remember to use a or an before a singular countable noun when referring to it generally or for the first time.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was child and I really love, uh, this.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really loved it.

The pronoun it correctly refers back to the bike. This is normally used to identify or point to something, but it is less natural here as the object of loved. Use object pronouns such as it to refer to previously mentioned nouns.

× To be honest in my country, cars are more popular than bikes because now everyone prefer to ride a bike car and not by ride ride the ride bike

✓ To be honest, in my country, cars are more popular than bikes because now everyone prefers to drive a car rather than ride a bike.

Everyone is grammatically singular, so the present-tense verb must take the third-person singular form prefers, not prefer. Remember to add -s or -es to the verb after singular subjects such as everyone, someone, and each person.

× To be honest in my country, cars are more popular than bikes because now everyone prefer to ride a bike car and not by ride ride the ride bike

✓ To be honest, in my country, cars are more popular than bikes because now everyone prefers to drive a car rather than ride a bike.

The original sentence contains repeated and incorrectly arranged words, such as bike car and ride ride the ride bike. The comparison structure rather than makes the contrast clear: drive a car rather than ride a bike. Plan the sentence using one clear verb phrase for each activity.