Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本直接，但存在明显语法错误和不自然表达。应将“when I child”改为“when I was a child”，将一般现在时“don't have”改为过去时“didn't have”。此外，“I mean”在这里没有必要；可以补充一个具体原因，使答案更完整，例如说明你更喜欢其他活动。建议使用“because”代替口语化的“'cause”，并确保答案控制在2—3句内。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I wasn’t interested in cycling. I preferred playing football with my friends instead.

提案: 回答表达了否定观点，但语法和逻辑不够清晰。“the city I can't see for many bike”应改为“there aren’t many bikes in the city”或“you don’t see many people riding bikes in the city”。注意“bike”应使用复数“bikes”。另外，题目问的是整个国家，不能只说明自己来自深圳；可以先回答全国范围的总体情况，再用深圳作为具体例子，并补充原因，例如交通拥堵、共享单车或公共交通的影响。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially in large cities. In Shenzhen, many people use shared bikes for short trips because they are convenient and affordable.

× I mean when I child I don't have a bike 'cause I don't like it.

✓ I mean, when I was a child, I didn't have a bike because I didn't like bikes.

问题发生在过去的童年时期，因此应该使用一般过去时。不能说 “when I child”，应说 “when I was a child”；“don't have”和“don't like”也应分别改为 “didn't have”和 “didn't like”。描述过去的经历时，要注意保持动词时态一致。

× I mean when I child I don't have a bike 'cause I don't like it.

✓ I mean, when I was a child, I didn't have a bike because I didn't like bikes.

“when I child”中缺少系动词 “was”。完整结构应为 “when + 主语 + was/were + 名词或形容词”，所以应说 “when I was a child”。

× Umm no, I'm from Shenzhen, the city I can't see for many bike.

✓ Um, no. I'm from Shenzhen, a city where I can't see many bikes.

“many”后面必须接可数名词复数，因此不能说 “many bike”，应改为 “many bikes”。谈论许多自行车时，要使用复数形式。

× Umm no, I'm from Shenzhen, the city I can't see for many bike.

✓ Um, no. I'm from Shenzhen, a city where I can't see many bikes.

动词 “see”后面可以直接接宾语，不需要介词 “for”。因此应说 “see many bikes”，而不是 “see for many bike”。此外，用 “where”连接表示地点的从句会更自然。

× Umm no, I'm from Shenzhen, the city I can't see for many bike.

✓ Um, no. I'm from Shenzhen, a city where I can't see many bikes.

“many”用于修饰可数名词复数，所以后面应接 “bikes”。正确搭配是 “many bikes”，不能说 “many bike”。