Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not directly answer the question. Begin with a clear yes-or-no response, then add one specific detail about the bike or how you used it. Check your pronunciation and word choice so that the examiner can understand your meaning.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was small and blue, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: You give an opinion, but the explanation is unclear, especially the phrase “thoroughly Caesar bikers.” State your opinion directly and support it with a specific reason, such as traffic, safety, public transport, or cycling facilities. Use a linking word such as “because” to connect your reason logically.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient. Many people use them to travel short distances, although heavy traffic can make cycling unsafe.

× Jessie hit a bike

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about possession in the past: Did you have a bike? The verb hit does not express possession. Use the past-tense form had after the subject I. Also, begin with Yes to give a direct answer.

× I don't think so because I'm thoroughly Caesar bikers.

✓ I don't think so because I rarely see bikers.

Thoroughly is not appropriate in this context, and the phrase I'm thoroughly Caesar bikers is not grammatically meaningful. Use the adverb rarely before the main verb see to explain that you do not often observe bikers. The plural noun bikers is appropriate when speaking about bikers in general.