Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你没有回答考官关于“童年是否有自行车”的问题，而是重复并改问了另一个关于书包的问题，因此信息传达基本失败。首先要准确听清关键词 bike 和 when you were a child，然后直接回答 Yes/No，并补充一到两个具体细节。注意过去时应使用 “were”，不要使用 “are”。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bike with a basket on the front. I often rode it to school and around my neighborhood.

提案: 你再次误解了问题，把 bikes 听成了 bags，因此没有表达对自行车普及程度的看法。回答此类问题时，应先给出明确观点，例如 “Yes, I think they are quite popular”，然后说明原因，并加入具体例子。建议使用 because、especially 和 for example 连接信息，使答案更完整、更自然。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in small towns. They are convenient and inexpensive, so many people use them for short trips. For example, bike-sharing services are common in large cities.

× Did you have a bag when you are a child?

✓ Did you have a bag when you were a child?

主句使用一般过去时“Did you have”，因为问题询问童年时的经历；时间从句“when you are a child”也应使用一般过去时“when you were a child”，以保持时态一致。描述过去的状态或经历时，应使用“was/were”，而不是现在时“am/is/are”。