Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Javob tushunarsiz va savolga aniq javob bermaydi. Avval “Yes, I did” yoki “No, I didn’t” kabi to‘g‘ridan-to‘g‘ri javob bering. Keyin velosipedingiz bor-yo‘qligi, undan qayerda foydalanganingiz va bu haqdagi fikringizni 1–2 ta aniq gap bilan tushuntiring. Talaffuz va so‘zlar ravshan bo‘lishiga e’tibor bering.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight years old. I usually rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: “Yes” javobi grammatik jihatdan to‘g‘ri, ammo juda qisqa va qo‘shimcha tafsilotlarga ega emas. Javobni sabab bilan kengaytiring va mamlakatingizdagi velosipedlardan foydalanish holatini aniq misol bilan izohlang. “Because”, “especially” yoki “for example” kabi bog‘lovchi va iboralardan foydalaning.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people ride them for exercise and short trips because they are affordable and environmentally friendly.

× Says Bola.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence is not a grammatically meaningful answer to the examiner's question. Use a complete sentence with a subject, a verb, and the past tense because the question asks about a past experience.

× Loring is never expected abrasive.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

This sentence is grammatically malformed and does not answer the question about having a bike during childhood. To improve, give a direct answer using the past-tense structure subject + had + object.