Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，并提供了原因和童年经历，内容基本完整。但“because I was very poor”表达略显生硬，可以改为“my family couldn’t afford one”，语气更自然；“at my friends’ houses”应改为“at my friends’ homes”或“at my friends’ places”；“at the time that time”和“this time”重复且不自然，应简化为“back then”。另外，使用“However”或“Fortunately”等连接词，可以使转折更清晰。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike because my family couldn’t afford one. However, I often rode my friends’ bikes when I visited their homes. I really enjoyed it because it gave me a chance to spend time with my friends.

提案: 回答表达了明确观点，也解释了自行车受欢迎的原因。但“backs up”应改为“bikes”，“no matter you are”应改为“whether you are”，并且“an old man”可替换为更自然、更包容的“an older person”；“go somewhere you wanted”应改为“get where you want to go”。建议补充一个具体例子，例如共享单车或短途通勤，并使用“because”或“for example”连接细节。

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially for short journeys. Whether you are a child or an older person, you can use a bike to get around easily. For example, many people use shared bikes to commute or travel to nearby shops.

× So I usually rode the bike at my friends' houses, but I felt very happy at the time that time because I could spend this time with my friend.

✓ So I usually rode a bike at my friends' houses, but I felt very happy at that time because I could spend that time with my friend.

“bike”在这里是第一次提到的泛指自行车，所以应使用不定冠词“a”，而不是定冠词“the”。另外，“at the time that time”重复且结构不正确，应改为“at that time”。“this time”在回顾过去的某段时间时，使用“that time”更自然。

× Yes, backs up are very common on the streets in China because no matter you are a child or an old man, you can ride a bike easily to go somewhere you wanted.

✓ Yes, backs up are very common on the streets in China because whether you are a child or an old man, you can easily ride a bike to go somewhere you want.

“no matter”不能直接连接“you are a child or an old man”这种选择结构。表达“无论是……还是……”时，应使用“whether...or...”。例如：“Whether you are a child or an old man...”

× Yes, backs up are very common on the streets in China because no matter you are a child or an old man, you can ride a bike easily to go somewhere you wanted.

✓ Yes, backs up are very common on the streets in China because whether you are a child or an old man, you can easily ride a bike to go somewhere you want.

这句话描述的是现在普遍存在的情况，因此应使用一般现在时。“wanted”是过去式，应改为“want”。建议描述习惯、事实或普遍情况时使用一般现在时，例如“people want”和“they can ride”。