Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接表达了“没有自行车”，但后面的原因不够清晰，存在明显的语法和词汇问题。可以说“my family wasn't very wealthy”，而不是“was not so rich”；“自行车是奢侈品”应表达为“bikes were considered a luxury”。另外，“and little time”意思不清，应该删除或改为完整原因。建议使用“because”连接原因，并补充一个具体细节，使答案更自然、连贯。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family wasn’t very wealthy. At that time, bikes were considered a luxury in my hometown, so my parents couldn’t afford one for me.

提案: 回答包含过去和现在的对比，这是一个好的思路，但时态、单复数和词汇错误较多。“When I was young”后应使用过去时“bikes were”；“popular”拼写要正确；“no bikes are not popular”表达重复且不自然，应改为“bikes are less popular now”。“every family have cars”应改为“many families have cars”，因为并非每个家庭都有汽车。建议用“However”连接对比，并具体说明公共交通如何影响自行车的使用。

例: Bikes were very popular when I was young, especially among students. However, they are less popular now because many families own cars and public transportation has become much more convenient. People usually choose buses or subways instead of riding bikes.

× Bike is a very luxury objective.

✓ Bikes were a luxury in China.

这里是在泛指自行车，不能用单数形式“Bike”，应使用复数形式“Bikes”。另外，“a luxury”表示“奢侈品或很难得到的东西”，比“a very luxury objective”更自然。

× Bike is a very luxury objective.

✓ Bikes were a luxury in China.

问题描述的是学生小时候的情况，属于过去时间，所以应使用过去式“were”，不能使用现在式“is”。

× Bike is a very luxury objective.

✓ Bikes were a luxury in China.

“luxury”通常是名词，不能直接用“very luxury”修饰名词“object”。“objective”也不表示“物品”；这里用名词短语“a luxury”更准确、更自然。

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family was not so rich and little time in China Bike is a very luxury objective.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family wasn't very rich, and bikes were a luxury in China.

原句中“and little time in China”不是完整、清晰的句子成分，前后意思连接不自然。应使用完整的并列结构“my family wasn't very rich, and bikes were a luxury in China”。

× When I was young the bikes are very popula.

✓ When I was young, bikes were very popular.

“When I was young”表示过去时间，因此“are”应改为过去式“were”。“popular”是正确拼写；“popula”拼写不完整。

× When I was young the bikes are very popula.

✓ When I was young, bikes were very popular.

这里是在泛指自行车，不是指某些特定的自行车，因此不需要定冠词“the”。应直接说“bikes”。

× but no bikes are not poppyona now

✓ but bikes are not very popular now

“no”和“not”同时使用造成双重否定，表达不正确。否定句中保留“not”即可；同时应使用正确的形容词“popular”。

× every family have cars

✓ every family has a car

“every family”表示每一个家庭，语法上看作单数第三人称，所以动词应使用“has”，不能使用“have”。“a car”也更自然地表示每个家庭拥有一辆汽车。

× because every family have cars and we have very convenient transportation, public transportation.

✓ because every family has a car and public transportation is very convenient.

原句中的“we have very convenient transportation, public transportation”重复且结构不自然。可以直接用“public transportation is very convenient”表达“公共交通很方便”。