Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer does not address the question and is an incomplete noun phrase rather than a complete sentence. Answer directly with “Yes” or “No,” then add one or two specific details, such as when you used the bike, who gave it to you, or where you rode it. Use a linking word such as “because” or “so” to connect your ideas naturally.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: Your answer does not respond to the question and is not a complete sentence. State your opinion clearly, for example, “Yes, I think bikes are quite popular,” and then explain why with specific details about transportation, exercise, or cycling habits in your country. You could also mention a contrast, such as bikes being more popular among young people or in certain cities.

例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among young people and fitness enthusiasts. They are convenient for short journeys, and many people ride them because cycling helps them stay healthy and reduces traffic pollution.

× Commitment to providing excellent service.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The original answer is a noun phrase and does not contain a complete subject–verb structure. Use the past-tense verb had because the question asks about your childhood. Also, the correction directly answers the examiner’s question.

× Bring calm.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they bring a sense of calm.

The original answer is an incomplete sentence because it does not identify who or what brings calm. A complete answer needs a subject, such as bikes, and should directly respond to the question. Use are popular in the present tense because the question asks about a current situation.