Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Используйте прошедшее время, поскольку вопрос относится к детству: «I had a bike», а не «I have a bike». Ответьте прямо и добавьте одну конкретную деталь, например, как часто вы катались или где хранили велосипед.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed exploring the area with my friends.

提案: Начните с естественной фразы «To be honest» и используйте правильную структуру: «bikes are not very popular». Кроме того, вопрос касается популярности велосипедов в целом, а не только видов спорта. Добавьте причину или сравнение, например, что люди чаще используют автомобили или общественный транспорт.

例: To be honest, bikes are not very popular in my country. Many people prefer to use cars or public transportation, especially because the roads are quite busy and there are not many cycling lanes.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The phrase when I was a child refers to a completed period in the past, so have must be changed to its past-tense form, had.

× Be honest, no in my country, bikes not popular sports.

✓ To be honest, no, bikes are not popular in my country.

The fixed expression is to be honest, not be honest, when introducing an honest opinion. The preposition to is required in this expression.

× Be honest, no in my country, bikes not popular sports.

✓ To be honest, no, bikes are not popular in my country.

The original sentence is missing the verb are after bikes. English sentences normally require a verb, and are links the subject bikes to the adjective phrase not popular.