Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 没有直接回答考官的问题，而是重复了问题，因此缺少明确观点、细节和理由。建议先用“Yes”或“No”直接回答，再补充一到两个具体信息，例如自行车的颜色、使用场景或它带来的感受。

例: Yes, I had a blue bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed the sense of freedom it gave me.

提案: 回答内容难以理解，而且没有清楚表达自行车在本国是否流行。建议先明确回答“Yes, they are”或“No, they aren’t”，然后说明原因，并使用具体例子，例如骑自行车可以锻炼身体、避免交通拥堵或减少污染。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in large cities. They are convenient, affordable, and help people avoid heavy traffic.

× Dude seam bikes are popular in your country?

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country.

回答问题时，应使用第一人称来表达自己的观点，因此应将 your country 改为 my country。原句使用了疑问句形式，而且“Dude seam”不符合英语表达；回答“Do you think...?”时，可以使用“I think...”开头。