Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the examiner's question directly instead of repeating it, and make sure to identify the key word “bike.” Use a clear topic sentence followed by one brief supporting detail. For example, say whether you had a bike and explain how often you used it or what you used it for.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed exploring the area with my friends.

提案: Give a complete and accurate answer with a clear opinion. The phrase “GST bikes” is unclear and should be replaced with a relevant expression such as “Yes, bikes are quite popular.” Add a specific reason or example, and use a linking word such as “because” or “especially” to make the answer more coherent.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and young adults. They are affordable and convenient, and many people use them to travel short distances or avoid traffic.