Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly and use a complete, natural sentence. Explain how often you used the bike and where you rode it. For example, say that you regularly rode it to a nearby park; this gives a clear answer and adds specific supporting detail.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I regularly rode it to a nearby park, especially at weekends, because I enjoyed playing there with my friends.

提案: State your opinion clearly and support it with a reason or comparison. Use accurate vocabulary such as “popular,” “commuters,” or “traffic conditions,” and avoid unclear phrases like “people controlled.” You could explain that bike use varies between cities and rural areas.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who want to avoid traffic. However, they are less common in areas without safe bike lanes.

× Routine to new park call.

✓ Yes. I routinely rode my bike to a new park.

The original sentence does not have a clear subject and correctly structured verb phrase. The answer needs a subject, such as I, and a complete verb phrase. Because the question asks about childhood, the past-tense verb rode is appropriate. Routinely is the correct adverbial form of routine.

× Routine to new park call.

✓ Yes. I routinely rode my bike to a new park.

The question asks about a past period, when you were a child, so the main verb should be in the past tense. Rode is the past tense of ride.

× It is different people controlled.

✓ It depends on the person.

The original sentence has an unclear structure and does not express a complete, logical idea. It depends on the person is a natural present-tense answer meaning that people have different opinions or habits regarding bikes.