Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You did not provide an answer. Respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details, such as how often you rode your bike or where you used it.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends, especially at weekends. It was a simple bike, but I really enjoyed riding it.

提案: Answer directly and use accurate grammar: say “Bikes are popular” rather than “bikes for regular.” Also, clarify your comparison with cars by saying that bikes are less common than cars or less convenient for long-distance travel. Add a specific reason or example and use a linking word such as “however” or “because.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in smaller cities. However, they are less common than cars because cars are more comfortable for long-distance travel. Many people still use bikes for short trips and exercise.

× Yeah, bikes for regular in my country but not much compatible cars.

✓ Yeah, bikes are popular in my country, but they are not as popular as cars.

The plural subject bikes needs the auxiliary verb are before the adjective popular. The original phrase bikes for regular does not contain a grammatically complete verb phrase. Use be + adjective to describe the subject, as in bikes are popular.

× Yeah, bikes for regular in my country but not much compatible cars.

✓ Yeah, bikes are popular in my country, but they are not as popular as cars.

When comparing the popularity of bikes and cars, use the comparative structure not as + adjective + as: bikes are not as popular as cars. The phrase not much compatible cars is not a correct comparison. Make sure the adjective describes the same quality for both things being compared.