Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ не соответствует вопросу: вы сказали “a bag” вместо “a bike”, поэтому смысл стал неясным. Используйте прошедшее время: “I didn’t have…” вместо “I haven’t…”, а после “my parents” нужен глагол во множественном числе — “thought”. Кроме того, причина “it was extreme” звучит неестественно в этом контексте; лучше объяснить, что велосипед был слишком дорогим или родители считали его опасным. Начинайте с прямого ответа, затем добавьте одну конкретную причину.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was too dangerous, so they didn’t buy me one. I usually walked to school instead.

提案: Основная идея понятна, но необходимо использовать связку: “I think bikes are very popular”. После “everyone” нужен глагол в единственном числе — “has”, а не “have”. Фраза “entries in the city” непонятна; вероятно, вы хотели сказать “in many cities” или “in urban areas”. Избегайте повторения “everyone” и добавьте конкретную причину или пример, например удобство, низкую стоимость или экологичность велосипедов.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people use them because they are cheap and convenient for short journeys. In addition, cycling helps people avoid traffic jams and stay healthy.

× No, I haven't a bag when I was a child because my parents think it's so extreme.

✓ No, I didn't have a bag when I was a child because my parents thought it was so extreme.

The question refers to a past period, so use the simple past: did not have, not have not. The verb think should also be changed to the past form thought to maintain consistent past-time reference. The past form of be, was, is also more appropriate in the because-clause.

× Yeah, I think bikes so popular in my country because everyone have bike and entries in the city everyone ride a bike.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are so popular in my country because everyone has a bike, and everyone rides a bike in the city.

The clause bikes so popular is missing the verb are. Use are with the plural subject bikes. Remember that a complete English sentence needs a subject and a verb.

× Yeah, I think bikes so popular in my country because everyone have bike and entries in the city everyone ride a bike.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are so popular in my country because everyone has a bike, and everyone rides a bike in the city.

Everyone is grammatically singular, so the verb must take the third-person singular form: has, not have, and rides, not ride. In the present simple, add -s or -es to the verb after he, she, it, and singular indefinite pronouns such as everyone.

× Yeah, I think bikes so popular in my country because everyone have bike and entries in the city everyone ride a bike.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are so popular in my country because everyone has a bike, and everyone rides a bike in the city.

The singular countable noun bike needs an article. Use a bike when referring to one bike in a general, non-specific way.