Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ понятен и дан напрямую, но есть грамматические ошибки: для прошлого нужно использовать “didn’t have”, перед существительным в единственном числе нужен артикль “a”, а выражение “when I child” следует заменить на “when I was a child”. Постарайтесь убрать “Umm” или использовать его реже. Для более полного ответа добавьте одну конкретную деталь или причину, например, почему у вас не было велосипеда.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was unsafe to ride in our neighborhood.

提案: Вы выразили мнение и провели сравнение, что соответствует вопросу, но ответ звучит неуверенно и содержит неполные предложения. Используйте связную структуру: сначала дайте общий ответ, затем объясните различие между большими и маленькими городами с помощью linking words, например “whereas” или “because”. Добавьте конкретную причину: велосипед может быть популярен в больших городах из-за пробок, общественного транспорта или велосипедных дорожек.

例: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in large cities, because they are convenient and help people avoid traffic. In smaller towns, however, fewer people use them because public transport is usually more convenient and there may be fewer bike lanes.

× Umm no I don't have bike when I child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past, so the verb should be in the past tense: did not have, or didn't have. Use was because the phrase refers to a past state: when I was a child.

× Umm no I don't have bike when I child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The singular countable noun bike needs the indefinite article a. Say a bike, not bike.

× Umm no I don't have bike when I child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The clause when I child is missing the verb was. The correct structure is when I was a child.

× A big city yes, but small city no.

✓ Bikes are popular in big cities, but not in small cities.

The answer refers to cities in general, so use the plural forms big cities and small cities. Using plural nouns makes the general meaning clear.

× A big city yes, but small city no.

✓ Bikes are popular in big cities, but not in small cities.

The original phrases do not contain a complete verb phrase. Add are popular to form a complete sentence.