Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, but avoid unnecessary repetition such as “Yes, I did have.” Add one or two specific details, such as when you received the bike, how often you rode it, or where you used it. Use a linking word like “because” or “and” to develop your answer naturally.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents gave it to me when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends. It was a simple blue bike, but I really enjoyed using it.

提案: Your answer is clear, but it is too brief and provides no supporting details. Explain why bikes are popular and mention a specific example, such as their use for transportation, exercise, or environmental reasons. You could also add a contrast with cars or public transport to make the answer more developed.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and office workers. Many people use them to exercise or travel short distances because they are convenient and environmentally friendly. In large cities, bike-sharing services have also made cycling more common.