Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，也提供了年龄和同朋友骑车的细节，内容基本有效。但“I I”是明显的重复；“I have had to ride”时态和含义不自然，这里应使用过去时“had to ride”或“used to ride”。“At that time”后面的语序也需要调整，并且可以使用“After school”连接信息，使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was six, and I used to ride it with my friends after school. We often rode around our neighborhood and sometimes raced each other.

提案: 回答观点明确，也提到了共享单车和通勤场景，但“sharing B bikes”表达不准确，建议说“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing services”。“go to the walk”不符合英语习惯，应改为“walk to the subway”或“ride to the subway”。可以进一步说明自行车受欢迎的原因，例如方便、便宜、能够解决最后一公里问题，并使用“especially”或“because”自然衔接。

例: Yes, definitely. Bikes are very popular in my country, especially shared bikes in large cities. Many people ride them to the subway station because they are convenient and affordable. They are also useful for covering the last mile of a journey.

× My parents bought a bike when I was only 6 years old and at that time every day after school I I have had to ride my bicycle with my friends.

✓ My parents bought me a bike when I was only six years old, and at that time, I had to ride my bicycle with my friends every day after school.

“When I was six years old”和“at that time”都表示过去的时间，因此应使用一般过去时“had to”，而不能使用现在完成时“have had to”。“Had to”表示过去的必要性。建议看到明确的过去时间时，优先使用一般过去时。

× My parents bought a bike when I was only 6 years old and at that time every day after school I I have had to ride my bicycle with my friends.

✓ My parents bought me a bike when I was only six years old, and at that time, I had to ride my bicycle with my friends every day after school.

主语“I”重复了两次，造成句子结构错误。应删除一个“I”，保留“I had to ride”。建议说完主语后直接接谓语，避免重复主语。

× Bikes are really popular in my country, especially sharing B bikes.

✓ Bikes are really popular in my country, especially shared bikes.

这里需要表达“被共享的自行车”，所以应使用过去分词“shared”作定语，而不是现在分词“sharing”。“Shared bikes”表示“共享单车”。此外，“B”是不必要的字符，应删除。

× Every day many people use these bikes to go to the subway or they go to the walk.

✓ Every day, many people use these bikes to go to the subway or go for a walk.

英语中表示“去散步”通常使用固定搭配“go for a walk”，不能说“go to the walk”。另外，前后两个动词共用主语“many people”，第二个“they”可以省略，使句子更自然。