Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, nhưng có nhiều lỗi phát âm hoặc chuyển thành từ sai khiến câu trả lời khó hiểu: “buy” nên là “bike”, “help help” nên là “helped”, “write” nên là “ride”, và “process” có thể là “practised” hoặc “cycled”. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên dùng quá khứ nhất quán và thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về chiếc xe hoặc cảm xúc của bạn. Hãy sử dụng cấu trúc: trả lời trực tiếp → nêu ai đã dạy bạn → mô tả tần suất hoặc địa điểm đạp xe.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother taught me how to ride it in a park near our house. I practised there almost every weekend, and I really enjoyed becoming more independent.

提案: Bạn đã nêu quan điểm và đưa ra lý do phù hợp, nhưng có nhiều lỗi từ vựng hoặc phát âm: “by score” nên là “bikes”, “right pie” nên là “ride bikes”, và “it help” nên là “they help” vì chủ ngữ “bikes” số nhiều. Bạn cũng nên dùng từ nối như “especially” hoặc “because” để liên kết ý, đồng thời bổ sung một ví dụ cụ thể về học sinh, người đi làm hoặc tình trạng giao thông. Câu trả lời hiện khá ngắn, vì vậy có thể phát triển thành 3 câu rõ ràng.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. Many people ride them to avoid traffic, especially in crowded cities. They are also commonly used by students and people who live close to their workplaces.

× Yes, I had a buy when I was a child. My mother help help me learn to write in the park and I process there almost every weekend.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother helped me learn to ride in the park, and I cycled there almost every weekend.

The question asks about the past, so the past-tense forms helped and cycled are needed. Helped agrees with the past-time meaning, and cycled is the appropriate past-tense verb for traveling by bike. The words buy, write, and process appear to be word-choice or transcription errors; bike, ride, and cycled make the meaning clear.

× I think by score quite popular because they are very convenient and cheap.

✓ I think bikes are quite popular because they are very convenient and cheap.

The sentence needs a clear subject after think. Bikes is the subject of are quite popular, and this structure makes the sentence complete and logical.

× Many people choose right pie in my country because it help avoid traffic.

✓ Many people choose to ride a bike in my country because it helps them avoid traffic.

After choose, use the infinitive structure choose to ride. The phrase ride a bike is also the correct expression for using a bicycle. Adding them after helps makes the meaning clearer.

× Many people choose right pie in my country because it help avoid traffic.

✓ Many people choose to ride a bike in my country because it helps them avoid traffic.

The subject of helps is it, which is third-person singular. Therefore, the verb must take the -s form: helps, not help.