Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 질문을 그대로 반복하지 말고, 먼저 ‘Yes’ 또는 ‘No’로 직접 답하세요. 그다음 자전거를 언제 샀는지, 얼마나 자주 탔는지와 같은 구체적인 세부 정보를 한두 문장으로 덧붙이세요. ‘because’를 사용할 경우에는 반드시 완전한 이유를 이어서 말해야 합니다.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 의견을 분명한 문장으로 시작하고, ‘my country popular bike’ 대신 ‘Bikes are popular in my country’와 같이 주어와 동사를 정확히 사용하세요. ‘I can’t really’는 뒤에 생각이나 이유가 이어지지 않아 삭제하는 것이 자연스럽습니다. 자전거가 인기 있는 이유를 교통 체증, 건강, 환경 등의 구체적인 예와 함께 설명하고, ‘because’ 뒤에는 완전한 절을 사용하세요.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people ride them for exercise and short trips because they are affordable and environmentally friendly.

× Yes, I can't really I think my country popular bike because.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original sentence has an incorrect word order and an incomplete structure. The phrase 'I can't really I think' is not grammatically organized, and 'because' is unnecessary because it does not introduce a complete reason. A clear sentence structure is 'I think + subject + verb + complement.'

× Yes, I can't really I think my country popular bike because.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The plural subject 'bikes' requires the plural verb 'are.' The original sentence does not include a proper verb after 'my country' and uses 'bike' when referring to bikes in general. Use 'bikes are popular' to make the subject and verb agree.