Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer in the past tense because the question refers to your childhood. Use “didn’t have” rather than “don’t have,” and add a brief reason or detail to make the answer more complete. For example, mention whether you preferred walking or whether your parents did not buy you one.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was safer for me to walk to school, and I only learned to ride one when I was a teenager.

提案: Begin with a clear direct answer, such as “Yes, I think they are.” Avoid the incorrect phrase “most of some student” and use “many students” or “most students” instead. Use “commute” as a verb or “commuting” as a noun, and avoid repeating the word. Add a specific reason or example to support your opinion.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. Many students ride them to school or university because cycling is affordable and convenient. It also helps them avoid traffic during rush hour.

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I didn't have one.

The question asks about a past situation with did you have, so the answer should use the past tense. Use did not, or didn't, instead of don't. Adding one makes it clear that you are referring to a bike.

× I think yes because most of some student use it for commute commute.

✓ I think so because most students use bikes for commuting.

Most students is the correct quantifier phrase. Most of some student is incorrect because most should be followed directly by a plural noun when speaking generally. Avoid combining most of with some in this sentence.

× I think yes because most of some student use it for commute commute.

✓ I think so because most students use bikes for commuting.

Student must be plural because the sentence refers to more than one student. Use students after most. Also, bikes is used to match the general plural meaning.

× I think yes because most of some student use it for commute commute.

✓ I think so because most students use bikes for commuting.

After the preposition for, use a gerund ending in -ing when describing an activity. Therefore, use commuting rather than commute. The repeated word commute should also be removed.

× I think yes because most of some student use it for commute commute.

✓ I think so because most students use bikes for commuting.

The pronoun it is singular, but the sentence refers to bikes in general. Use the plural noun bikes or the plural pronoun them. Using bikes here is clearer and avoids ambiguity.