Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the examiner's question directly. Your response repeats the question with a different topic, so it does not address whether you had a bike. Begin with a clear answer and add one specific detail or reason. For example, mention what type of bike you had and how you used it.

例: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

提案: Your answer is relevant, but it is too short and does not provide supporting details. Explain why bikes are popular and give a specific example, using a linking word such as “because” or “for example.”

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. For example, many people use them to commute to work or exercise in local parks.