Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ не связан с вопросом и не позволяет понять, был ли у вас велосипед в детстве. Начните с прямого ответа «Yes» или «No», затем добавьте 1–2 конкретные детали, например, где вы катались и как часто. Следите за понятным произношением и используйте простую грамматику: «I had…» или «I didn’t have…».

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school. It was a simple blue bike, but I really enjoyed using it.

提案: Ответ трудно понять, и он не выражает ясное мнение о популярности велосипедов в вашей стране. Сначала прямо ответьте: «Yes, I think they are popular» или «No, they aren’t very popular». Затем объясните причину и приведите конкретный пример, например использование велосипедов для поездок, спорта или доставки. Используйте связки «because», «especially» или «for example», чтобы логично развить ответ.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people ride them for exercise, while others use them to travel short distances. For example, cycling is common in parks and around residential areas.

× The mish Mocha Kadgati Vijay Ribbonak.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence is not grammatically understandable and does not contain a clear subject, verb, or meaningful sentence structure. Use the simple past tense had because the question asks about a past childhood experience. A suitable structure is subject + past-tense verb + object + time expression.

× The Dumas Kakuya bikes are more popular, named to a Strania.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original sentence is not grammatically understandable and does not clearly answer the question. Use the present tense think and are because the question asks about a general situation in your country. The sentence should have a clear subject and verb, such as I think bikes are popular.